I have the ARC of this one, though it comes out in a few days (8/28/12). I’m not the biggest Lesley Livingston fan. I read some of her other series (about fairies), and I wasn’t super impressed with it. There was something missing. This book grabbed my attention a long time ago though because it’s about a girl who fences competitively (!) and well, Norse mythology plays a major role. And like her other series, the setting is current day New York City. It seemed to me that urban fantasy + Norse mythology + sword fights = recipe for fun.
It wasn’t as fun as I wanted it to be. I didn’t hate it; I
had fun reading it. It was still, well, missing something. I’ll get to that in
a bit though. It all starts when a giant tree crashes into the fancy gym at
Gosforth Academy. Mason, along with her evil brother (that no one else sees as
pure awful), her crush (Cal), the school’s mean girl, and their fencing coach all
get trapped inside the gym after fencing practice. The storm apparently messes
with the building’s electricity and lock system. But when the tree comes down
on them, so does Fennrys Wolf (a gorgeous and naked guy with no memories of
anything except his name), and a pack of Draugr (supernatural monsters out for
blood).
Fennrys seems built to destroy the monsters and does so,
getting the kids and fencing instructor underground in the building’s basement,
after of course some sword play for Mason and a major injury for her Cal.
Fennrys comes down after he fights some more and helps heal Cal with some
Shaman-y sounding words that he can’t explain why he knows. He also can’t
explain to the fencing coach how he got be as good at fencing as he just was.
And when the teens start talking too much, Fennrys gets them all to go to sleep
so he can leave.
Mason’s dad freaks out that his daughter was in so much
danger and takes her and her brother home (from their boarding school) for the
weekend to recuperate. But as soon as Mason is back at school, Fennrys finds
her and they become quick sword practicing friends and work together to try to
get Fennrys’ memories back. Meanwhile, Mason’s evil brother is plotting how to
help fulfill the end of the world Norse prophecy that was meant for his father.
Apparently, his father failed the prophecy when his wife gave birth to Mason, a
girl. She was supposed to have 3 sons, but only had two and then died giving
birth to her daughter. However, the brother figures out a way around this, a
way not so good for Mason.
Between the fencing competitions, the jogs down memory lane
in NYC with Fennrys, and the random fights with various supernatural creatures
that keep popping up in very public places, Mason never suspects she has
anything to do with a prophecy for the end of the world. There’s a scary train
scene, kidnappings, claustrophobia, romance, and a lot of mythological
creatures.
I loved how the author combined elements with the NYC from
her other YA series. I loved all the elements that made up the book. I loved
the idea of the book and the plot of the book. What I wasn’t really buying were
the characters. Why did Mason love fencing? Why was her brother such a jerk? I
mean he practically killed her when she was a toddler. He locked her in a shed
during a game of hide and seek and then forgot she was there when he went away
for the weekend. She was trapped in a shed for 3 days and no one knew about it.
This then results in her claustrophobia and a terrible relationship with her
brother. But, the brother never shows any remorse. Mason assumes he always felt
guilty even though he never acted that way…
Also, the characters would go through these giant, colossal
changes and then there’d be no explanation for why the changes happened. For
instance, her dad goes from being the most overprotective father on the planet
to agreeing to his daughter’s demise. And the mean girl at school goes from
insulting Mason all the time to becoming best friends with her (with no
explanation for why). And Cal, the guy Mason was first crushing on goes from a
flirtatious sweetheart to one of the biggest jerks in the book (for no
explained reason).
Also, I was finally able to pinpoint what bothered me about
Livingston’s other series and I think it is her voice. She creates these
amazing sounding characters (like Mason who has a fear of closed spaces, yet
loves to fence and Fennrys Wolf, a strong warrior meant to help bring about the
end of the world, yet can’t remember anything), but then she gives them all the
same voice. There were moments when Fennrys, a creature of legend, would use modern
day girly expressions. And sometimes the evil brother would say things in the
exact same way Mason and the mean girl and even the father did. And it just
didn’t make sense for them all to sound so similar.
I did read this pretty quickly. I loved the world Livingston
writes in. And I loved the story. I just think her characters needed some work
to be more believable. I also think her characters needed to be more consistent
for me to develop any more empathy or understanding for them. I give this one a
7/10.
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